Thursday 26 April 2012

Crit

After finishing what I could of my website, I then presented it to the class for crit. I thought that this would be a good chance for me to get some feedback on what I could improve or change.


These were some of the points that I received:


- Change the styling on the headings
- Change the styling on the navigation
- Could add some drop shadows on the images and navigation
- Perhaps change the title to have clothes cut out
- Make the post it note a lighter yellow and the logos bigger
- Finish the gallery, contact and entrepreneurship page
- Sort out the gallery page
- Try and balance the layout
- Change the background on the white text boxes
- Maybe include more imagery like sketches
- Maybe change some of the text so that it is handwritten, perhaps for the headings and tagline
- Sort out the code so that the content is fixed and the content doesn't move when the page is adjusted
- Like the title
- Like the cork board idea


With the comments that I received there is a lot that I can work with in order to improve my website, however there a some points that I am going to focus on and complete and I have some I will go back an go through the rest of the points. The points below are what I am going to focus on first: 



- Change the styling on the headings
- Change the styling on the navigation
- Make the post it note a lighter yellow and the logos bigger
- Finish the gallery, contact and entrepreneurship page
- Sort out the gallery page
- Try and balance the layout
- Maybe change some of the text so that it is handwritten, perhaps for the headings and tagline
- Sort out the code so that the content is fixed and the content doesn't move when the page is adjusted

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